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Blind Beauty

blinded by such beauty
the thrill of escape, of lying
such beauty
amazing but tricky
the thought of you excites me
your so amazing, yet unpredictable
perhaps even fictional, or not
exhumed by the raging flames of lust
tired of fighting for a purpose
I became exhausted, very impetuous
you have used me, as I you
sinned, we have and regretted
how cowardly are we? how passionate were our acts?
drenched in this very thing called life
miracles are just but a fantasy
our obstacles may seem life-threatening
our souls may dislike each other
but our bodies are entwined
and together, we majestically live
on a lie, on a fantasy
while the forbidden fruit loses it''s color
the animal inside me begins to hide
I who just breath to live, I who just wish to die
live to sin, and die to say goodbye

by MONEYAL13
posted on 05/19/2012

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Comments: 3

Comment by prettyspl: Mar 21, 2016 4:40 pm
Gritty and imagitive. Very good write! Vote

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Comment by forgottenfairy: May 19, 2012 3:19 pm
I agree with SpeakeroftheSilent it was captivating each line drawing me further into it. Causing chills to erupt across my skin. well written =)
Comment by SpeakeroftheSilent: May 19, 2012 11:07 am
This is incredibly captivating; the more I read the more drawn in I was. Fantastic ending.

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