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Hey Cutie

Rival me in spirit
I can revel in your taste
The more I think on this now
I back down with quick haste

Months pass on with feeling
Mine connected to.
I'm dreaming constantly
Every night about you.

It's the sweetest thing I have
As I go to shut my eyes
But I feel I lack in person
What caused previous demise

I'm confining all of myself now
Because the truth still seems too weird
A love so nonexistent
But is that what I've feared.

A wound I can hold now
And pass around for show
You know how I got it.
And as I try to let go
It thickens.

I recall her berating me
You aren't the same, she'd scream
Into my ears all night
But that was never a dream.

And though I've found what I need with you
Her infliction slows me down
I rise above it, lonely
I have to do it now.

But what I wouldn't give to hold you
As I feel that would set me free
Let down my whole guard again
Here I am to be.


by Vaurien
posted on 07/09/2009

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Comments: 23

Comment by Vaurien: Aug 1, 2010 8:29 am
to post
Comment by Vaurien: Aug 1, 2010 8:29 am
of it
Comment by Vaurien: Aug 1, 2010 8:29 am
Comment by Vaurien: Aug 1, 2010 8:29 am
real good.
but i got poetry to post
Comment by poetmeme: Sep 2, 2009 5:24 am
wow.... is all i can say as i am in tears.
Comment by MyMisery: Sep 1, 2009 5:51 am
this struck me its fantasctic!!! i felt every word as i let them linger from my lips
Comment by sexypancake95: Aug 27, 2009 10:04 pm
amazing <3, enough said
Comment by ninasworld: Aug 10, 2009 10:09 am
this is very good...
Comment by apainedlove: Jul 30, 2009 9:30 pm
love the poem good job lol
Comment by heartbreakbny: Jul 29, 2009 5:12 am
great poem!

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