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Him and Her

The air was crisp,
The trees were bare,
He stopped the car,
With a playful stare.

Then the couple lie down,
In the midst of the street,
Developing plans,
for the next time they'd meet.

Within his arms,
she felt such bliss,
he was the first boy she trusted,
enough to kiss.

The sun had set,
Stars glittered above,
He held her close,
And she fell in love.

He took her to a meadow,
One year after that day,
He told her there was something special,
He needed to say.

He guided her through the meadow,
Covering her eyes tight,
He knew she wouldn't be prepared,
For this fairytale sight.

Dozens of hills,
Made up of thick green grass,
With a horizon that had no end,
The sky was so blue,
The trees were so lush,
This had to all be pretend.

A tiny river ran through the meadow,
It was clear with a gentle flow,
She wished she could stay in this place forever,
She just didn't want to go.

She spun around atop the highest hill,
And a soft breeze kissed her face,
Then he appeared from the distance,
and held her around the waist.

He brushed her hair away from her ear and looked her deep in the eyes,
He whispered to her " <i>I love you, and without you, I would die.</i>"

by lovelyricsxx6
posted on 11/07/2007

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Comments: 36

Comment by maxiiwaxii: Dec 8, 2011 9:31 am
wow this is really weird but you pretty much just said everything me and my gf have done together and this is all recent. wow amazing poem this is my favorite of all time it reminds me of her so much. i love her and without her i would die.
Comment by flippinthrulife17: Oct 11, 2009 3:40 pm
Wow....Shivers this gave me chills...I really love this...The imagery is sweet...It's romantic...
something about the way it ended got to me...
Comment by SexyMunchkin: Jan 7, 2009 4:24 am
Vote Up Smiley



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Comment by volleygirl9867: Dec 1, 2008 7:05 pm
this is a great poem.
(:
Comment by wordfreak: Nov 11, 2008 8:52 pm
do i smell a twilight influence?
Comment by TheWanderingAngel: Jun 3, 2008 5:15 pm
amazing. truly amazing.
Comment by christi823: Jan 31, 2008 9:55 am
Aww. This is cute. [:
I can really picture this.
Great poem!
Voting up!
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Comment by tiffany: Jan 10, 2008 6:17 pm
wow that was so so good i wish i could find a guy like that......i love this poem it sounds so good great job
Comment by UpAgainstTheWall: Jan 8, 2008 1:13 am
aww
so amazingly cute
Comment by GiveMeU: Dec 29, 2007 6:19 pm
AMAZING POEM!!!

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