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Hold You Until Dawn

The wave gently lapping the beach
You hold me close with your hands
The moon touches our bare skin
Our bodies writing I love you in the sand

The taste of your skin on my lips
Quenches the thirst deep within
Your body is covered in kisses
Not an inch has been forgotten

I am imprisoned by your legs
Every nerve feels on fire
Your arms hold me tightly
I feel your warmth inside

Our two bodies become one
The wind plays a beautiful song
The waves crashing inside us
The feelings so strong

Your head lays on my chest
I trace your back with my hand
The stars seem to be smiling
As we lay resting in the sand

by Brandon
posted on 09/25/2008

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Comments: 36

Comment by TiffanyLoganAlexander: Sep 3, 2018 4:52 pm
Omg
Comment by OnMyOwn: Aug 1, 2010 10:37 pm
Hehe Smiley Simply amazing
Comment by TiffantAnnLoganAdams: Dec 7, 2009 10:34 am
wow. Very passionate
Comment by TiffantAnnLoganAdams: Nov 16, 2009 10:37 am
I had shivers running up and down my arms
Comment by becca8: Feb 8, 2009 12:42 pm
chills!!!
Comment by lonelygal: Dec 14, 2008 2:44 pm
beautiful poem
Comment by momochi: Dec 1, 2008 7:29 pm
it is great
Comment by lailaa: Nov 28, 2008 3:58 pm
Very romantic
Comment by itsreallymesalads: Nov 16, 2008 2:36 pm
omg, if u ever ever get married that person will be da luckiest one alive
Comment by itsreallymesalads: Nov 16, 2008 2:36 pm
omg, if u ever ever get married that person will be da luckiest one alive

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