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i will be here for you

WHEN TIMES ARE DARK,OR BRIGHT AS DAY, I WILL BE HERE FOR YOU!WHEN YOU FEEL HOPELESS, OR NEED A SHOULDER TO CRY ON, I WILL BE HERE FOR YOU! WHEN YOU STUMBLE AND FALL, OR NEED SOMEONE TO BE YOUR CLOUD UP IN THE SKY, I WILL BE HERE FOR YOU! ALL YOU HAVE TO DO IS REACH OUT, GIVE ME A CHANCE TO BE YOUR LOVE, FOR I WILL BE HERE FOR YOU ALWAYS!!

by LoveMaster
posted on 02/22/2014

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Comments: 3

Comment by prettyspl: Feb 24, 2014 1:14 pm
Nice write ... Full of hope so don't lose that feeling. Keep it close...
Comment by LoveMaster: Feb 23, 2014 3:44 pm
ok thanx
Comment by IsabelleLockhart: Feb 23, 2014 1:27 am
Hi! My name is Rachel, and I have been writing for well over a decade now. I must say: you are off to a good start. Might I ask why the whole poem is capitalized? One of the more subtle tricks of poetry is capitalizing few and specific letters for emphasis of a word. The content of this is sweet. You are truly off to a good start. If you even need any advice or want me to look over something, just message me on this site. Keep it up! Smiley

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