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Tears in her Eyes

She cries in her sleep
For every dream is sad
All the broken promises
The love she wished she had

As if it were made of paper
Her heart is torn and tattered
Thinking if she died tonight
It just would not matter

Will someone break these chains
Free her soul and let it fly
Or will it just be forgotten
To simply wither away and die

There is someone for everyone
She found that true one day
The chains broke and she was free
Her happiness was there to stay

That night he held her close
Whispered please baby don't cry
Only this time it was happiness
That brought the tears to her eyes

by Brandon
posted on 01/16/2009

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Comments: 139

Comment by smokesignals: Jan 13, 2020 12:09 am
wonderful work...
Comment by TiffanyLoganAlexander: Sep 3, 2018 6:20 pm
I can totaly relate to that
Comment by Kumoriko: Apr 26, 2017 10:05 am
So sweet.
Comment by MBJPancras: Aug 12, 2015 6:46 am
Let her soul be freed with her beloved's tears

Wonderful
Comment by RIguel: Sep 10, 2012 12:01 am
amazingly lovely.. Smiley
Comment by BeachRose21: Jun 1, 2012 6:52 pm
Beautiful wording and truly touching. The third stanza really stands out to me. Thanks for sharing.
Comment by PoeticPrincess: May 13, 2012 12:09 pm
This is beautiful, I felt like you were talking about me until the end, I still haven't found my happily ever after. Nevertheless, I really enjoyed this.
Comment by BethHalliwell: Mar 3, 2012 6:29 pm
This is a great poem. I love the emotions in it. It tells a story that girls can relate too.
Comment by ToWritePoetryOnHerArms: Dec 16, 2011 7:46 am
awwwee I love this so much<3 reminds me of myself at times.
Comment by secretpoet2: Dec 10, 2011 6:14 pm
wow.

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