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The only thing that matters

Looking into the depths of your soul
Looking for the one thing that matters
Not knowing if I will ever be able to find it
Trying to find what only your heart and dreams can see
And hoping against hope that what it sees is me

by poeminister
posted on 05/09/2007

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Comments: 2

Comment by broken3heart3: May 9, 2007 12:21 pm
ya i luv3 this poem.. made me smile and laugh when you told me Smiley ya whooo go poeminster keep writing for the practice
Comment by aCrazyApe: May 9, 2007 8:05 am
First poem huh. Well i must say its pretty good. Keep up the good job. One suggestion try for line

3 instead of "trying to find" use "Searching for"

2 Instead of "not knowing" try "Wondering"

Good poem.

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