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This Place

Loves recall has engraved our outline in this place.
Is the spiders memory as unswerving?
Have the suns caressing rays missed your delicate skin?
Did the merging waters capture our faces in permanence?
Does the winds wistful eloquence create us anew as it blows?
Did the shadows from the trees record our passage beneath?
Our secret revealed.
Yet I have told no other.
I write these words in silence, a mute testimony
To what once was.
But our image remains alive in this place.
It can not be removed.
You, me,
We then,
Were here.
We saw the day and hoped for tomorrow.
We caught a brief glimpse of love's promise.
We were not liars,
But thieves of time.
For time has now forgotten us,
Yet our memory lingers, and love remembers
This place that was ours.

by xDxReneexBosqx
posted on 07/16/2009

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Comments: 20

Comment by MsSchizo: Oct 16, 2009 9:57 am
"We were not liars,
But thieves of time" siiigh soo sweet
Comment by cockatoofury: Aug 13, 2009 10:09 pm
Very, very impressive.
Comment by Julieelovesyou: Aug 10, 2009 11:59 pm
i really like it!! loss for words tho...sorry no good description here but i love it
Comment by xxxbeccabugxxx: Aug 3, 2009 1:24 pm
this is really good, check mine out.
Comment by Cye: Jul 26, 2009 12:22 pm
That's really beautiful! I loved reading it.
Comment by ragerulez95: Jul 22, 2009 9:40 pm
'nuff said.
Comment by exstasy: Jul 21, 2009 5:06 pm
Comment by Julieelovesyou: Jul 20, 2009 6:27 pm
this is really beautiful...i love it and im not suprised ur on the popular page....dont be so shocked
Comment by xXJennyKrisstyXx: Jul 19, 2009 6:58 am
Your going to make me cry....foo.
Your writing today is really taking a toll on me today.
Well anyways great job just how I excepted from my enemy/best friend.
Until we meet again lol. =D
Comment by savannah12: Jul 17, 2009 7:37 pm
i love it... i dont know what else to say

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