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A Tortured Soul

Falling stars
canít catch me now.
Iím falling through the sky.
Only His hand can
Save
the breath of a tortured soul.

And the ground
no longer
has the Power
to steady the ever-Shaking.
For this one trembles
over the past:
How far can repentance take you?
And only His hand can
Save
the breath of a tortured soul.

ParentsóMother, Father,
canít help this that they made.
The past is over,
so set in stone.
Now only His hand can
Save
the breath of a tortured soul.

by BuriedDeepAsICanDig
posted on 10/31/2009

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Comments: 2

Comment by BuriedDeepAsICanDig: Oct 30, 2009 6:50 pm
thankyou
Comment by Genocidal: Oct 30, 2009 6:23 pm
I like it because it makes you think and you can understand it and what it's saying. The short snappy lines you have added also add to the overall effect.

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