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i remember those blue eyes
and the ideas that they conveyed

i remember those lips
and all the words they didnt say

the words that i once lived by
now, empty words they are,
void of any meaning.
you had me fooled for so long.

i had it figured out
and then you came along
convinced me im too jaded
now, youve proved yourself wrong.

im making progress past
that place i was with you.
but everytime, i'm taken back
do you know what youve put me through.

an agent of hypocracy
and yet you have my tears

because of you im wiser,
not beyond my experiences,
but beyond my years.

by BuriedDeepAsICanDig
posted on 09/25/2009

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Comments: 6

Comment by BuriedDeepAsICanDig: Feb 28, 2010 6:57 pm
thanks fruitloop199 i think ill take a look at yours too and i love the nickname btw(:
Comment by fruitloop199: Jan 14, 2010 9:11 am
Amazing, I love it. Your poetry is quite interesting to read. I enjoy it very much. Smiley
Comment by savannah12: Sep 24, 2009 7:13 pm
i love it.......alot

WRITE ON!!!!!!
Comment by flippinthrulife17: Sep 24, 2009 7:06 pm
wow...This is Very ...good
yeah I really like it but its sad...
Comment by unkown: Sep 24, 2009 7:02 pm
hmm, very good, and true.
Comment by DarkestAngle: Sep 24, 2009 7:02 pm
Just really amasing

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