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Mein herz brennt

Love not as the world loves,
See not through their eyes.
Feel the emotion pure and free.
Know what you feel;
And feel what you know to be true.

by Sinnocence
posted on 05/04/2007

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Comments: 11

Comment by quies: Jan 19, 2008 11:28 am
Interesting and brief. Leaves me desiring more, but not in a bad way. Also, I like the title. Rammstein is a good band, and the German gives the poem a foreign sense of depth and ambiguity. The German, however, does need to be a little corrected: "Herz" needs to be capitalised. German nouns are always capitalised regardless of anything; otherwise, if not, it isn't considered a real word. Good job.
Comment by moonlightmage: Jun 22, 2007 3:20 pm
Excellent. Short but very to the point (chya...thats over used but Im still going to say it ^.~) anyway...I love the first two lines. They could mean different things I suppose but as for me, I would say love as God loves and see through his eyes. It could be an excellent statement for many things. Great Job =)
Comment by DarkDay: May 12, 2007 9:20 am
WOW beautiful!! Amazing it's truly touching!!
Comment by ragingquiet13: May 10, 2007 1:09 pm
srry i had to leave this kind of a comment but u never seem to do this enough:


Comment by LoveLiesBleeding: May 9, 2007 7:11 am
Btw, I can't get onto the reply mail cause it's filtered (I'm using school computers cause I don't have t'internet at home, meh^^;;) but anyways, thankyou for suggesting Helnwein, I checked out his site and have addrd some of his images into my Art project as they link into the Surealism/nightmare themes in my project. So thanks for that. Had another really screwed up dream last night, which again has inpired an even more morbid drawing/painting (mixed media). Hmmm....lovely! Xxx
Comment by LoveLiesBleeding: May 9, 2007 7:06 am
Stunning, as always
Comment by InMyDreams: May 8, 2007 5:39 pm
BEAUTIFUL, its so true; its really is, i love it <3
Comment by tearsofrain: May 5, 2007 8:13 am
gah. perfection
i wish the world worked the a poets mind does
Comment by PoemWritingGuy: May 5, 2007 1:09 am
Amazing! It's beautiful!
Comment by ragingquiet13: May 4, 2007 2:25 pm
wow short but powerful all the same great poem

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