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With the wind and flower petals
I'm standing in the meadow.
I'm gazing forward
But I can't see the light.
I'm stretching out my hand
But it just doesn't feel right.

I hear the strings playing
Somewhere behind the clouds,
Camomile scent reaching my nose...

I try to escape the dream of those..
But I stay forever in that place.

by Kanade
posted on 05/08/2010

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Comments: 2

Comment by Nick1959: May 9, 2010 6:18 am
I agree with darkworldangel, very nicely written although I don't know if I find this soothing maybe more reassuring know others feel trapped in a dream. Nicely done
Comment by darkworldangel: May 8, 2010 4:24 pm
i think you got your point across and more. i find this to be very soothing. keep on writing. good luck

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