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pessimistic

Live your life to it's fullest.
But how great is this life
when you measure it
by the dents and scars
by unclaimed love and broken hearts.
how quickly filled this life gets with
shattered dreams and misplaced things.
how busy we keep,
chasing shadws that were never there.
wasting time catching the
falling minutes. with mouths open,
we'll drown in the rain.
open your eyes instead and see
this merely mortal life is half-way over.
the glass is half empty,
so take another sip, my freind,
we're getting closer to the end.

by unpredictable
posted on 02/17/2008

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Comments: 6

Comment by SmileEmoKid: Nov 6, 2008 9:13 am
you suck! lol JKJKJK
Comment by brokenXbruisedXbleeding: Feb 19, 2008 1:19 pm
this is good.. its very true
Comment by oceanreverie: Feb 17, 2008 7:47 pm
pessimistic is basically NOT looking on the "bright side." nicely written though, i love how you did the unexpected and twisted the "glass half empty-half full" idea. nicely written, keep it up!
Comment by andypandy114: Feb 17, 2008 5:33 pm
um , whats pessimistic mean ?
Comment by crazyforcodymylove: Feb 17, 2008 2:21 pm
it's cool!!!! love how you sayed take another sip my friend,
We're getting closer
Comment by kilove: Feb 17, 2008 12:56 pm
It pays to be pessimist. Great poem.

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