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I sit in the grass
Long before sunset
The sky so blue
Like the eyes
Of a sapphire
I watch the
wind blow
and the birds
sing to the
flow of a beautiful
melody
help me forget
Because today I
don't want to remember.
by AvveyHope
posted on 09/05/2011
Long before sunset
The sky so blue
Like the eyes
Of a sapphire
I watch the
wind blow
and the birds
sing to the
flow of a beautiful
melody
help me forget
Because today I
don't want to remember.
by AvveyHope
posted on 09/05/2011
Comments: 2
Comment by MsSchizo: Sep 5, 2011 7:09 pm
I think it flows. It's beautiful and sorrowful.Comment by timewornsoul: Sep 5, 2011 3:55 am
I like it but to me the flow seemed to not quite be there. Other than that a good write.