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A child walked upto me
and said "Wow When i grow up I want to be just like you!"
I smiled and said"Oh no, you dont want to be LIKE ME.For im in no good place and im no artist..."

And so I said to him
"Dear child,don't be in a hurry to grow up.
One day time will catch up with you faster than you know;
When you're not looking;and when you least expect.
And then you'll discover that you were so intent on moving foward
That you forgot to live in the moment."

A few moments later,his little sister came upto me crying.I asked her what was wrong
and she said"Mommys not being nice. i wish i was bigger so i could spank her instead."

"Soon your eyes will open to the world as they were when you first were born;
And things will be different..."

she cut in.....

"will there still be ice cream n candy???"

"Yes. But this time All the colour will fade from your eyes.
The lullaby will stop.
I just hope you have the heart to brave the storm;
and the sight and strength to shield yourself;
Because noone else can do it for you.
This is your life,live it as you choose,
And i hope someday all your dreams come true."

by Sinnocence
posted on 05/15/2007

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Comments: 10

Comment by fearsnightmare: Sep 28, 2009 12:08 pm
Its confusing in a way. The attitude is cynical yet you bring a positive feed through the girl and through the 'living in the moment' idea. I like it!
Comment by infidel: Sep 18, 2008 1:53 pm
great
Comment by loveme77: Feb 8, 2008 7:10 pm
Beautiful Smiley
Comment by shyhallow: Jul 18, 2007 5:10 pm
Wow... I'm speechless. Beautiful work.
Comment by oldman: May 30, 2007 10:30 pm
Wow, those children did not know what hit them. Intense stuff along with some of the simplest appreciation. The colors sometimes briefly revisit. I expect when centering or as contract is fulfilled they might permanently affix. Who really knows.

Excellent work!
Comment by DarkAngel: May 18, 2007 7:01 am
omg thats gwjus, i love it
Comment by LoveLiesBleeding: May 17, 2007 6:30 am
Yeah thank you for that^^
Will try to get on t'internet asap and yeah, you can send me some of your owrk that'd be really cool. I'm trying to put some of mine up on my myspace, so I'll send you my e-mail thru that if you want? Thanks for your poems they're really really great^^
Comment by LoveLiesBleeding: May 16, 2007 2:50 am
Beautiful...I just never really have much to say on commenting your poetry because no words can describe how they are, they're just too amazing!!!
I will reply to your e-mails asap, unfortunately not having t'internet at home and the 'reply mail' being filtered at school...makes it a bit difficult...but meh^^;; I love the second poem you sent, did you write it?
It's wonderful!!^^
Xxx
Comment by tearsofrain: May 15, 2007 1:20 pm
'"Yes. But this time All the colour will fade from your eyes.
The lullaby will stop.
I just hope you have the heart to brave the storm;
and the sight and strength to shield yourself;
Because noone else can do it for you.
This is your life,live it as you choose,
And i hope someday all your dreams come true."'
lately i've been thinking about color. and how much brighter things used to be. i seem to be dieign inside. and i wonder if i'm just growing up. i'm still so young...
beautiful job. obviously >.< <3
Comment by ragingquiet13: May 15, 2007 1:12 pm
omfg this is F U C K I N G
A M A Z I N G !!!! [excuse my lang]how can u write like this truly amazing i wish i could write like this and dont tell me i could if i had better vocab becuz i dont and i cant just make my slef have one so dont go there plz ive heard tht enough anyway have u ever been published??

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