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Worth The Wait

What is this that you feel? You're surrounded yet not found. Your heart, it's in the right place Still your feelings are seemingly close to the ground. It's all an illusion. It's all a test of your character and mind. Sometimes you're the bad guy When you feel like you should have shined. Karma, Good or bad, it comes back around No one seems to understand anymore What you gave is what will be found. Self-control? Does that even exist anymore? Since when did it become okay, To be such an attention whore? Plaster on your make-up Put on your fake clothes. Maybe you're acting out Because nobody really knows. Self-esteem? Do you even have one at all? Because you know it's bad... All he'd have to do is call... You wanna wear him, tear him, Show him the time of your life, But you know if he denied you, It'd be like the stab of a knife. Walk away, why would you wanna do that? No reason to stop adoring him right? Except for he ignores you. How is that worth a fight? Intelligent and attractive, Outgoing and and independant You know you could appreciate what he has to offer. You could love him in any event. Tolerance and patience You know he could be worth the wait. But nothing can keep you From what lies in your true fate.

by coldfire146
posted on 09/30/2013

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Comments: 6

Comment by prettyspl: Jan 11, 2014 2:33 am
There are some very good lines here, and good lessons to be learned. We'll done coldfire146! Keep writing and improving ...
Comment by FavoriteTheMute: Nov 25, 2013 2:34 am
"Since when did it become okay, to be such an attention whore?"

Ask Miley Cyrus, she is making millions from it. Or Britney. Or Madonna. Or...
Comment by PoeticPrincess: Oct 5, 2013 9:03 pm
This was nicely written but it would be better with stanzas. Organization enhances writing.
Comment by KAS: Oct 2, 2013 10:30 am
Stanzas please. My adhd was having a fit when I saw this
Comment by AngelicDarkness: Oct 1, 2013 7:59 pm
Editing with stanzas would be a very good idea.
Comment by BreeBree: Sep 30, 2013 12:31 am
If he isn't interested: move on.
Nobody likes a wasted heart.

Also, stanzas would make this much easier to read.

#lifetipswithbree

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