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It actually hurts
That reminder
That i am left with nothing
While you
And everyone else
Wanders the world with someone

Left alone
With my thoughts
An uncomfortable situation
With nothing else
In an empty world
Lacking some maturation

How does one grow up
In singularity
When no one lives alone?
This world is cruel
Whatever the situation
Why we need another to atone

by Phantom
posted on 05/25/2010

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Comments: 4

Comment by LoveMeDead: May 25, 2010 9:29 am
I get that, maybe not in the same way you're going through it, but I get that. It sucks SO much. Sad face
Comment by Phantom: May 25, 2010 8:23 am
heres to the mini rant... the only reason ive gotten so far is cuz ive been offered distractions...they do not help you move forward in life, but they do allow you to forget about things... the poem is about the inability to move forward in the world alone... the only time ive felt like my life was going anywhere was when im with someone, and its been 9 months and i havnt so much as had a vague interest in anyone... by that i mean, not caring enough to actually pursue someone... i havnt moved anywhere in my life, i live day to day, working and wondering why i cant move on to the future, and the reason behind it is that i know i cant do it alone... call me weak, call me senseless, but when you lose what was potentially youre life, you strugge...
Comment by LoveMeDead: May 25, 2010 6:15 am
haha spelling error...." THE fact"
Comment by LoveMeDead: May 25, 2010 6:13 am
This is sad but really good. I like it. Although I feel like I have to justify that fact that you're not the only one alone and not everyone has someone. Sorry if that makes you feel bad or insults you, but I had to say it. Anyway.... good poem, like always.

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