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Blue Eyes

Your eyes are always brightest
When they are filled with tears
Its the saddest truth
Id rather not believe


The rain comes streaming
Down your face
While your bright blues
Stay as clear as day


The lightning strike was harsh
And completely unexpected
The calm before the storm
The winds will blow away


Wish the sun would shine
To brighten up that face
The pain behind those eyes
Is for another day

by Phantom
posted on 05/10/2010

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Comments: 19

Comment by xsew: Jul 17, 2010 9:56 am
great job Open smile
Comment by whitewabbit: May 30, 2010 6:17 am
very emotive and real
Comment by mellowyellow: May 26, 2010 6:37 pm
Woww, I love this! Awesome job!
Comment by ErinLyric: May 24, 2010 5:35 am
This is so sweet LOVE IT! Smiley
Comment by thatgirl123: May 24, 2010 3:07 am
aw you sound like a great friend and its a touching poem
Comment by Phantom: May 23, 2010 10:34 am
@random1470 i actually havnt shown it to her... she may have read it on my tumblr, but im not sure...
Comment by random1470: May 23, 2010 8:57 am
Interesting poem, shows real emotion and it's nice that you wrote this for your friend. I hope you showed it to them.
Comment by tgunz: May 23, 2010 8:44 am
I like the natural elements used
Comment by onetimelover: May 19, 2010 8:28 am
sweet
Comment by Repines1: May 18, 2010 9:06 pm
It's alright, reminds me of something..

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