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Confused n Lost

Sometimes I'm feeling a lil' uneasy
I'm searching for the one who will please me
Lost the one I love but I had no choice
Mixed up inside but yet I show fake rejoice
In a state of true confusion
Not really sure which direction ill be choosin'
I have to listen to myself on this one
Who ever said loving someone was fun
Sometimes I try to talk to god but he isn't always there
My hurt inside is almost to much to bear
Am I less of a man because I cry
I'm expressing my feelings the best I can try

by TylerS23
posted on 04/27/2008

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Comments: 2

Comment by TylerS23: Apr 27, 2008 7:11 pm
thanks, I'm new at writing poems so I'm looking for any insight I can get.
Comment by childOFtheNIGHT: Apr 27, 2008 4:50 pm
I think it's really good, and no your not less of a man because you cry, your human and you have feelings, just like the rest of us

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