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I'll Never Forget You

That's a beautiful dress you're wearing
I don't think I have seen it before
I remember the first time I met you
My friends rushing me to your door

I never met a girl so sure of herself
You told everyone that I belonged to you
We all laughed at your directness
But we knew you meant it too

We talked late at your window one night
You laughed and hid when the police came
You saved me at the very last second
Yeah you were right, it was a funny game

Everyone moved when we were together
Because they knew we played so rough
You would always run and jump on my back
Squeeze me and ask me if I had enough

Then one night, my lips met yours
Your intense fire turned to a warm glow
Again you were right, I belong to you
Now it was time for our feelings to show

We held hands as we rode in the back seat
A special night we never wanted to end
Then tragedy came and hit us head on
Your beautiful eyes would never open again

I remember the first day I met you
And every moment in between too
You would only be given sixteen years
You lived everyday like you always knew

by Brandon
posted on 11/16/2008

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Comments: 68

Comment by TiffanyLoganAlexander: Sep 3, 2018 5:24 pm
Beautiful
Comment by GoddessOfWar: May 2, 2017 9:20 am
Damn... this struck a seriously painful cord
Comment by trouble: May 25, 2012 7:29 am
you really are an amazing writer.
Comment by xxXBlueAngelXxx: Feb 17, 2012 8:47 pm
she's still lucky because in her life he met you. I'm sure you made her life worth living...and at the very last moment i'm sure she's happy that she had you. wonderful poem, as always.
Comment by ToWritePoetryOnHerArms: Dec 16, 2011 7:49 am
I was in class while I read this and all of a sudden I wanted to say "awweee thats so sad" but then realized that would be kinda odd and quensioning to the other students. this is so sad but I cand definatly relate. I love your poems<3
Comment by lovineverymoment2115: Sep 22, 2011 9:11 pm
That's amazing it mad me cry happy tears and then it was so touching and thank you for making the poem

~Patty~
Comment by daisylove: Apr 26, 2011 10:35 am
this is sooo sad but touching!
Comment by taybabe1300: Apr 10, 2011 11:27 pm
i almsot cried...its full of love, then you ended it with tragidy
Comment by sk8ergurl2o: Mar 22, 2011 8:08 am
thats soo sad and so sweet and heartbreaking
Comment by thinkingpoet45: Mar 19, 2011 4:59 pm
i cried Sad face I love it! pure emotion!

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