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I Love Him, and Because of That I am Destined to Fall

Stronger than lust
Hardest to kill
You want it to last
But you die from the will

It tears you to pieces
Yet still keeps you sane
Coming with joy
And leaving with pain

Craving the passion
Searching for flame
Wanting a partner
But ending with blame

It rips off the bandaid
Then makes you put it back on
Your innocence taken
Your sanity gone

Love is a game
Cruel with intention
It leaves you with devils
Of your own creation

Kisses that kill
Charm that can blind
When it comes to love
Be weary of mind

by NaturalBeauty
posted on 06/11/2012

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Comments: 6

Comment by BrokenSmile831: Aug 2, 2012 9:07 am
i love this, its great!
Comment by sweetcurse: Jun 19, 2012 8:47 am
Lovely write Smiley
Comment by PoeticPrincess: Jun 18, 2012 6:38 pm
The flow and the rhyme scheme here really enhances the poem. It beautifully expresses how damaging love can be, wonderful write.
Comment by AngelicDarkness: Jun 17, 2012 2:53 am
I would maybe make the title a little shorter, but it is good work. I can imagine this as a song.
Comment by AngelicDarkness: Jun 17, 2012 2:52 am
Nice poem, I enjoyed it.
Comment by emofaith: Jun 11, 2012 7:33 pm
this is amazing..well written

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