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mowing my way to fall

i can taste the fall already
and i've yet to love.
and as the lawn mower's mowing
the grass becomes less tall.

and yes, i've been reduced to this
mocking empty state;
lonely, as the changing breeze
won't sweep me off my feet.

so i'll sit here counting words,
like i'm counting days
'till i'll never see you, dear,
just as i never have.

by tearsofrain
posted on 08/02/2009

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Comments: 8

Comment by BeautyFromPain7: Feb 9, 2010 10:36 am
I like it Smiley
Comment by panda: Nov 9, 2009 12:22 am
nice (:
Comment by SisterofDarkness: Sep 18, 2009 4:20 pm
so i really like this and i wish i could give my jessi a hug...i've missed reading ur writing...and talking to you...
Comment by niallhybris: Sep 14, 2009 2:45 am
really good turns of phrases here, reminds me of a more heartbroken falloutboy style writing

which is a good thing
Comment by emoloser: Aug 31, 2009 9:03 pm
rele like it!
Comment by Atwood: Aug 18, 2009 10:22 pm
tearsofrain, you've got a good poem here.
You know I'm going to expect you in the highest spirits when the leaves start to change =)


you know what i know
what you mean in this.
Comment by ReverberatingSilence: Aug 5, 2009 5:37 pm
splendid, the emotional dissaray you subcum to paints such a tragic portait.
superb!
Comment by NiceGuysLoveBetter: Aug 2, 2009 8:01 pm
Good poem tearsofrain, haven't seen your work in a while.

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