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My Fate

My world falls down,
and pieces turn to ashes
i start to crumble,
from these new born gashes.

this fight seems never ending
my knees are starting to quake...
i can't understand what's happening,
when everyone seems so fake.

and soon i'll start to fall
my tired legs will give way...
cus' im dying,second by second,
but do you have anything to say?

But, i pray every night,
to God, that he;d give
me one simple reason,
one reason to live.

so when i'm no longer able,
to hold my own weight,
as my body crashes down...
i'll know,this is my fate.

by CassidyEarly
posted on 11/04/2007

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Comments: 4

Comment by HeartlessAngel: Jan 16, 2008 1:50 pm
yea great poem
Comment by Beckizzle454: Dec 19, 2007 7:31 am
wow i like it! really deep
Comment by CassidyEarly: Nov 5, 2007 6:14 pm
:] or i guess :[
Comment by darkartisticgurl: Nov 4, 2007 5:47 pm
wow i can relate scaryly... great poetry too

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