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Permanent Sadness

I see it
In the corner of my eye
A gentle grey

I decline
Tearing my gaze away
Choosing to see

And it works
For a moment or more
Daisies blooming
For me

Seconds pass
Or hours, I cannot tell
I feel it again

The blanket
That's placed on me
Wrapped around

Reminding me
That this is permanent
The daisies and joy
All lies

That's what it is
Waiting to be seen

Being alone does not make me sad
It reminds me that I am

by danielle
posted on 06/20/2013

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Comments: 9

Comment by PoeticPrincess: Jul 8, 2013 6:16 am
The last line really tied together the poem, very relatable, lovely write.
Comment by blackfallenrose07: Jul 7, 2013 10:20 pm
Beautiful. Can definitely relate.
Comment by demonmagic: Jul 6, 2013 2:10 pm
This is it. The half-hearted battle you feel you can never win.
Sadness has a way of sticking. Very well done you have my vote
Comment by prettyspl: Jun 28, 2013 8:08 pm
Very moving, great expressions. Vote
Comment by thestutteringbandit: Jun 27, 2013 10:39 pm
Agreed. This was a great read.

Comment by HallowReveries: Jun 25, 2013 7:56 am
The structure here is what I will remember. This is grand.
Comment by trustingtime: Jun 25, 2013 12:49 am
Expressed well, I think many people will be able to relate to the feelings in this poem.
Comment by forgottenfairy: Jun 24, 2013 3:46 pm
Well written. Im voting this up.
Comment by IStillLoveHim14: Jun 22, 2013 6:55 pm
This is amazing.
I think it really shows depression.

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