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shattered eyes

Sun left to blacken the sky
Moon fades to shatter my eyes
I'm waiting here in darkness
My silence is enough to know that I'm empty
The stars don't exist in my skies
I look only to drown more in their lies
Unfinished painting I hang in my room
Keep on looking to the imperfections
I'm flawed like this
Wet hair and no make up on
Looking at the mirror
Willing to face myself
Is this me?
Tears came unexpectedly
I don't know myself still
And I keep on hiding behind my masks
I don't want them to see me weak
Can I in my weakness find my strength?
Can the flawed me find perfection in somewhere else?
I long to be free
Can I be free?

by NOangelsLEFT
posted on 08/21/2008

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Comments: 50

Comment by SLIPshodSLIP: Sep 22, 2015 2:21 am
i often have the same thoughts. a good read Open smile keep it up
Comment by Turtleturtle: Jun 30, 2011 8:29 pm
you can be free love
Comment by MyDarkestDreams: Mar 15, 2010 5:23 am
Great poem
Comment by SilentBeauty: Apr 15, 2009 2:13 pm
i love this its so beautiful
Comment by Marie: Dec 8, 2008 5:22 pm
Comment by ArcAngel: Nov 5, 2008 4:37 pm
Amazing Poem!!!
Certainly one of my favorites!!!!
Comment by Aspire2: Oct 29, 2008 9:30 pm
tht is good!
Comment by NOangelsLEFT: Oct 26, 2008 1:02 am
thanks for your comments

to jacobc : religion isn't a prison, the real prison is that world we are living in . I always feel obligated to reach everyone's expectations but god will always love me even though i'm flawed
Comment by jacobc: Oct 25, 2008 2:55 pm
Someone who writes this beautifully does not need to think about the outside, you know just as much as I, that its the inside. And Dancorsa, thats not true, you can lean on your own understandings, and still follow god. Religon is not a prison. ;)
Comment by cutiepie: Oct 10, 2008 11:38 am
great poem

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