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The statue

Dead shapeless statue in the room
Broken parts that will never fit again
Unbearable painful secrets carrying
Alone in the cold covered with dust
Knowing that this girl had changed forever
Knowing that this monster didn't leave me
I walk to fade
I walk to break
Ghosts of pure imaginations
Her worst nightmare is here
And she knows she can't be ever well
No one believes me when I say I fall
Hiding the daylight through a never-open window
Afraid of the dark but it's her that's dark
Are you afraid of me, me?
Surroundings of her hurt are filling the room
Calling for someone to save the lost light in her
What had happened here?
I pray for you please send me an angel to save me
Angels of mercy please come and heal me
I'll lose if I keep on running on the same track
Please god accept this lost soul

by NOangelsLEFT
posted on 08/08/2008

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Comments: 14

Comment by OneBrokenHeart: Oct 16, 2008 8:58 am
Alrighty! love it aha keep it up! ~~~>Kangdee, Poet of broken dreams
Comment by Tequilla: Sep 9, 2008 8:01 am
good poem, I like it.
Comment by watever76: Sep 6, 2008 4:31 pm
wow i loved it its one of my fav poems just amazing
Comment by zozo: Aug 24, 2008 1:12 pm
well done, its a great poem! i love it! x
Comment by fade: Aug 16, 2008 5:33 pm
Beautiful.
Great raw emotion. Strong and bold, but written in a poetic way.

Great job!
Comment by lostinpoetry: Aug 15, 2008 6:02 pm
I absolutly dig this.
Comment by asdfyz: Aug 15, 2008 1:29 pm
Wow... that one is amazing. The emotion in this is amazing. I can see everything so vividly. I love this poem, definitely one of my favorite on here.
Comment by Chrisdizick: Aug 15, 2008 12:20 am
"Hiding the daylight through a never-open window
Afraid of the dark but it's her that's dark
Are you afraid of me, me?"

biblegateway.com, Exodus 3:10
Isaiah 58:8
Comment by trisha101: Aug 12, 2008 11:43 pm
amazing, thats all i can say. keep it up..
vote up
Comment by google: Aug 12, 2008 9:28 am

you're a poet.

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